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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름],
For me, it\'s not actually important if you believe in God, Allah or Buddha. Religion does not matter. What matter the most is your attitude towards other people. I believe that each religion teaches us to be a good person. And if you are a good person even without going to church or the temple, I think that\'s good enough.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I don\'t have a religion but many people have a religion and believe in God.
>> correct!
On Sunday my Korean people go to church.
>> On Sunday, many Koreans go to church.
My father-in-law usually goes to church in Seoul.
>> correct!
So he wants to believe God my family.
>> So he wants my family to believe in God too.
However I am very lazy so I walk up late on Sunday.
>> However, I am very lazy so I wake up late on Sundays.
I have to change my habit for going church.
>> I have to change my attitude and go to church.
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