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After I deicded to visit your country, I wanted to get a lot of information.
So I asked to my co-workers about your country.
I think that visiting is worth a thousand words.
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Hello, [이름]!
You are amazing , Ms. [이름]! Your writing skill is getting better and better. I\'m so proud of you. Keep it up!
See you tomorrow!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
After I decided to visit your country, I wanted to get a lot of information.
>> After I have decided to visit your country, I wanted to get a lot of information about the Philippines.
So I asked to my co-workers about your country.
>> So I asked my coworkers about your country.
I think that visiting is worth a thousand words.
>> correct!
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