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학생이 쓴 원문
We can learn a lot of things in many competition.
For example fair play etc.
Sometimes we can become alone without friends because of competition.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
You are right! Competition just like everything else has its advantages and disadvantages. Are you competitive, Ms. [이름]?
Take care!
~T. Lynn
We can learn a lot of things in many competition.
>> We can learn a lot of things in many competitions.
OR>> We can learn a lot of things through competitions.
For example fair play etc.
>> correct!
OR>> For example fair play and others.
Sometimes we can become alone without friends because of competition.
>> correct!
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