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Hi there Ms. [이름]!
I think losing weight had been a problem for women since how many centuries ago. I don\'t know which century started this but it has been going on for ages. As for me Ms. [이름], I tried dieting too when I was younger. Now, I don\'t care anymore. Actually, I know that\'s not right but I\'ve decided to just enjoy eating since it\'s my only hobby anyway.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
In my case, I want to eat a lot of lunch and then eat less food in the evening.
>> correct!
However, it is not easy.
>> correct!
I always eat a large lunch I also eat a large dinner.
>> I always eat a large lunch and I also eat a large dinner.
So I am so sad I can\'t lose my weight forever.
>> correct!
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