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학생이 쓴 원문
My most happiest is when my first daughter was born.
And my most saddest is when my mother was gone.
I think human's life is very important in our life.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!
So you were the happiest when you received the life of your daughter and you were the saddest when the life of your mother was taken away from you. I guess you could say life and death make us happy and sad.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
My most happiest is when my first daughter was born.
>> The happiest moment in my life was when my first daughter was born.
And my most saddest is when my mother was gone.
>> And the saddest was when my mother passed away.
I think human\'s life is very important in our life.
>> I think human\'s life is very important in our lives.
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