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In my opinion, people exercising are very dilligent.
Also exercising everyday is very difficult in our life
These days in my country, exercising is very popular.
A few years ago, many thin women were very popular in my country.
But many women want to be the glow of health.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!
Ye hey! Finally you had a free time today!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
In my opinion, people exercising are very diligent.
>> correct!
Also exercising everyday is very difficult in our life.
>> Exercising everyday is very difficult for most people.
These days in my country, exercising is very popular.
>> correct!
A few years ago, many thin women were very popular in my country.
>> correct!
But many women want to be the glow of health.
>> But now, many women want to be glowing with health.
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