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Hi there Ms. [이름]!(\",)
Parents are busy at work and the children are busy in school. So what should we do to have a quality family time?
Take care!(;
~T. Lynn
How often do you watch movies?
>> correct!
How often do you have a trip with family?
>> correct!
Do you have often have dinner with your family more than your friends?
>> correct!
These days I didn\'t spend time with my children because they are vey busy.
>> These days, I don\'t spend much time with my children because they are vey busy.
I understand them so I want to meet my friends but they are living far away from my house.
>> correct!
OR>> I understand that they\'re busy so I want to meet my friends but they live far from my house.
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