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Children grow up very fast.
I sometimes can't believe my age.
I already am in early 40th.
I can't imagine marriage of my children.
If would possible, I want to live with my children in my life.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!(\",)
Some people say, age is but a number. Do you agree?
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
Children grow up very fast.
>> correct!
I sometimes can\'t believe my age.
>> correct!
I already am in early 40th.
>> I am already in my early 40s.
I can\'t imagine marriage of my children.
>> I can\'t imagine my children getting married.
If would possible, I want to live with my children in my life.
>> If it would be possible, I want to live with my children all my life.
OR>> If possible, I want to live with my children my whole life or until I die.
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