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2017-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Rain

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Most people tend to believe movies and drama. However it is not a good way. Especially, foreigners tend to believe Korean movies and dramas. Nowadays K-pop and dramas are very puplar in the world. So they want to visti Korea but they tend to disappoint after visiting Korea. So I am sorry about that.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!

I think it\'s okay to watch and believe into movies and dramas, as long as you know your limitation.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it!

Call you tomorrow! ^^

Teacher Rain

Most people tend to believe movies and drama.

>> Most people tend to believe to movies and drama.
 However it is not a good way.

>> But I think it\'s not a good thing.
 Especially, foreigners tend to believe Korean movies and dramas.

>> For example, foreigners who watch Korean movies and dramas.
 Nowadays K-pop and dramas are very popular in the world.

>> CORRECT
 So they want to visti Korea but they tend to disappoint after visiting Korea.

>> So they want to visit Korea, but they get disappointed after visiting.
 So I am sorry about that.

>> CORRECT

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