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강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
I think it\'s okay to watch and believe into movies and dramas, as long as you know your limitation.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it!
Call you tomorrow! ^^
Teacher Rain
Most people tend to believe movies and drama.
>> Most people tend to believe to movies and drama.
However it is not a good way.
>> But I think it\'s not a good thing.
Especially, foreigners tend to believe Korean movies and dramas.
>> For example, foreigners who watch Korean movies and dramas.
Nowadays K-pop and dramas are very popular in the world.
>> CORRECT
So they want to visti Korea but they tend to disappoint after visiting Korea.
>> So they want to visit Korea, but they get disappointed after visiting.
So I am sorry about that.
>> CORRECT
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