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2017-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Rain

학생이 쓴 원문

If you could speak any other languages (besides English) which language would you like to speak? I want to speak Japanese. I have visited Japan and I want to visit there again. I want to speak Japanese if I can go there again.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!

If I could speak another language aside from English, I would like to learn Korean. ^^

Wow! If you have free time, then try learning Japanese.

I know you can do it! ^^

Keep it up Ms. [이름]!

~Teacher Rain~

I want to speak Japanese.

>> CORRECT
 I have visited Japan and I want to visit there again.

>> I have visited Japan, but I want to go there again.
 I want to speak Japanese if I can go there again

>> CORRECT

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