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My favorite restaurant is a Korean snack restaurant.
>>Correct
There are a lof of delicous foods like topokki, kimbap, ramen, rice burger and many more.
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>> There are varieties of food like topokki, kimbap, ramen, rice burger and many more.
Most Korean students like them.
>> Correct
So most this restaurant is located near the schools.
>> So most of these restaurants are located near schools.
My famaily loves eating so we go there every weekend.
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These days, there are many popular restaurants in Korea.
>> Correct
Also my family like to visit other places to eat.
>> My family also like to visit other places to eat.
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>> My family also like to go to other places to visit different restaurants.
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