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2018-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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I have seen a lot of good movies and I like romantic comedy movies the best. My favorite movie is "About Time". It was released in 2013 and many women liked it. I love the story of the movie. The main character can travel through time. He can go back in the past or go to the future. While he travels through time, he finds that time is very important in our lives. After I watched the movie, I felt very comfortable. And then I decided that I will live very hard.

강사 첨삭

I have seen a lot of good movies and I like romantic comedy movies the best.

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>> I have seen many great movies and I love romantic comedy the most.
 My favorite movie is \"About Time\".

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>> My all-time favorite is \"About time\".
 It was released in 2013 and many women liked it.

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 I love the story of the movie. The main character can travel through time.

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 He can go back in the past or go to the future. 

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 While he travels through time, he finds that time is very important in our lives.

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 After I watched the movie, I felt very comfortable.

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 And then I decided that I will live very hard.

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>> And then I realized that I will live my life to the fullest.

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