141205_Have you ever lost (or found) something valuable?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I am.
I lost the camera bag at three years ago in the Seoul by tour.
Inside the bag was for the DSLR camera of canon, small camera of sony and Polaroid.
The photos in teh camera that was more important than lost.
I lost memories so very sad.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Mr. [Name]!
Thank you for your composition! That was such a sad story. It\'s too bad you didn\'t get it back. I hope it won\'t happen again. Take care!
T. JanE ^^
Yes, I am.>> Correct
I lost the camera bag at three years ago in the Seoul by tour.>> I lost my camera bag three years ago in Seoul when I was on a tour.
Inside the bag was for the DSLR camera of canon, small camera of sony and Polaroid.>> Inside the bag was a Canon DSLR camera, Sony digital camera, and Polaroid.
The photos in teh camera that was more important than lost.>> The photos in the camera are more important than the cameras.
I lost memories so very sad. >> I lost photographs of memories, so I was very sad.
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