14th July

I have the workshop with my part members today. After meeting for strategy of this left year, we are going to theater for watching 'harryporter'. I have never watched the movie in the theater for a long time. So, If I have the chance to go there, I try to do it. These days, I am feeling the importance of the cultural life. We can live just one time. And this moment is not come back. So, Every moment is very important to us. Everyone knows this. But it is not easy to do that. After time goes by, I want to smile smoothly when I close eyes.

Hi there! You did a good job in writing this composition! You were able to express your ideas clearly. I noticed a few mistakes so, please check them out.  Have a great day! -T. Faye-   I have the workshop with my part members today. >> I have the workshop with my department members today. After meeting for strategy of this left year, we are going to theater for watching 'harryporter'. >> After the meeting for strategy for the remaining months of the year, we are going to the theater to watch 'Harry Potter'.I have never watched the movie in the theater for a long time. >> I have never watched a movie in the theater for a long time.So, If I have the chance to go there, I try to do it. >> So, if I have the chance to go there, I'll try to do it.These days, I am feeling the importance of the cultural life. >> These days, I am feeling the importance of cultural life.We can live just one time. >>We only live once. And this moment is not come back. >>And this moment will not come back. So, Every moment is very important to us. >>Correct OR>>So, every moment counts.Everyone knows this. >>Correct OR>>Everyone is aware of this. But it is not easy to do that. >>Correct OR>>But this is not easy.After time goes by, I want to smile smoothly when I close eyes. >> After time goes by, I want to smile smoothly when I close my eyes.