14th Jun, 2011

I was in Brisbane last month as I had the opportunity to studying English in Brisbane, which is one of my company's education curriculam. It gave me only one month living and studying in Brisbane, but It was a great exprience for me. Before I went there, my enthusiasm for learning English was lesser and lesser because it had not worked out the way I want. However, I was able to recover my passion. Due to short period of education, I have not been improved well but I have been motivated. So, now I would not to lose my will.

Hi there [이름]! Thank you for sharing your experience in Brisbane, as well as your interest in studying English, I,too, hope that you wont lose your interest again and I will be here for you in every step of the way !     See you tomorrow! - Teacher Joey   Anyway, here are my corrections: I was in Brisbane last month as I had the opportunity to studying English in Brisbane, which is one of my company's education curriculam. >>> I had the opportunity to study English in Brisbane last month as part of my company's education curriculum/incentive. It gave me only one month living and studying in Brisbane, but It was a great exprience for me. >>> I was given only a month to live and study in Brisbane, but it was a great experience for me.  Before I went there, my enthusiasm for learning English was lesser and lesser because it had not worked out the way I want. >>> Before I went there, my enthusiasm for learning English was decreasing because it didn't work the way I wanted it. However, I was able to recover my passion. >>> Correct!   or,  I was able to revive my passion. Due to short period of education, I have not been improved well but I have been motivated. So, now I would not to lose my will. >>>I only had a month to study and I think I haven't improved well enough, but I was motivated so now I'm so willing to learn.