15.02.04 HW
학생이 쓴 원문
Invent a New Holiday: Invent a new holiday. What would this holiday celebrate? How would you celebrate it? Would there be any special food or symbols for your holiday?
If I can invent a new holiday for me, I would like to celebrate my examination day. In Korea, students have to take the exam to go to university they want. So, the higher score they get, the better university they could go. In my case, I did my best for the exam regardless of the score. Therefore I want to celebrate the day to remind me of studying hard and doing my best.
Teacher,, did you have a cold? Me too..
I delayed the class because of my cold.
I miss you.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Reina!
Do you feel better now?
I hope you will feel better as days pass by.
Anyhow, I didn\'t have colds. I just needed to deal with
some things and that\'s why I wasn\'t able to meet you
yesterday. I apologize.
See you again soon!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Invent a New Holiday: Invent a new holiday. What would this holiday celebrate? How would you celebrate it? Would there be any special food or symbols for your holiday?If I can invent a new holiday for me, I would like to celebrate my examination day.
>> If I could invent a new holiday for myself, I would like to celebrate my examination day.
In Korea, students have to take the exam to go to university they want.
>> In Korea, students have to take an exam to go to university they want.
So, the higher score they get, the better university they could go.
>> Correct
In my case, I did my best for the exam regardless of the score.
>> Correct
Therefore I want to celebrate the day to remind me of studying hard and doing my best. >> Therefore, I want to celebrate that day to remind me of my hardwork.Teacher,, did you have a cold? Me too..
>> Teacher, did you have colds? Me too.I delayed the class because of my cold.
>> I delayed the class because of my colds.I miss you.
>> Correct.
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