15.02.27 HW

2015-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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When students move to a new school, they sometimes face problems. How can schools help these students with their problems? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer. When I was a child, I have the experience of moving to a new school and I faced problems such as making new friends or adjusting to a new place. In my case, to making a new friend, I asked anything to other students. The subjects of the questions are not important and for example, these can be about school, lunch menu, timetable or teachers. Then the talk can be started naturally. Another idea is attending a school activity. In many schools, there are some after-school activities for the students. So, attending this activity is helpful to meet new friends who have the same hobby or interest.

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Hello there, Reina. This is the first homework that I checked. I will be checking the other one as soon as possible. Hoping you can find time to check the corrections I made. Thank you and have a great day!~~Teacher Erine~~ When students move to a new school, they sometimes face problems. How can schools help these students with their problems? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.When I was a child, I have the experience of moving to a new school and I faced problems such as making new friends or adjusting to a new place. >> When I was a child, I had the experience of moving to a new school and I faced problems such as making new friends or adjusting to a new place. In my case, to making a new friend, I asked anything to other students. >> In my case on making a new friend, I asked anything to other students. The subjects of the questions are not important and for example, these can be about school, lunch menu, timetable or teachers. >> The subjects of the questions were not important and for example, they could be about school, lunch menu, timetable or teachers. Then the talk can be started naturally. >> Then the talk had started naturally. Another idea is attending a school activity. >> Another idea is to attend a school activity. In many schools, there are some after-school activities for the students. >> In many schools, there are some after-school activities for the students. So, attending this activity is helpful to meet new friends who have the same hobby or interest. >> So, attending these activities is helpful to meet new friends who have the same hobby or interest.

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