15.03.11 HW

2015-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

There is posible to be selected the candidate who have the record about crime. But that is too dramatic. In the real situation, we have to choose the candidate who is really nice and sincere. So, there should be a standard and qualification to candidate register. For this reason, a criminal record shouldn't be allowed to candidates.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Reina! I can see that you had time to answer your homework.^.^ Thank you for doing and I hope you can still find time to study the errors. Have a blast and see you tomorrow!^^~~Teacher Erine~~ There is posible to be selected the candidate who have the record about crime. >> It is possible to select the candidate who has a criminal record. But that is too dramatic. >> Correct In the real situation, we have to choose the candidate who is really nice and sincere. >> Correct So, there should be a standard and qualification to candidate register. >> So there should be a standard of qualification for the candidate to register. For this reason, a criminal record shouldn\'t be allowed to candidates. . >> Correct  

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