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2015-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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want to do their homework can find dozens of sites on the Internet that offer essays for sale. Do you think this is a legitimate business, or should these enterprises be shut down? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. In my case the sites of this business are legitimate. First, there is charge for that such as money or points. It is not free and there is charge of the documents copyright. Second, these sites can help students to do their homework. The documents could be used as a normative reference. So the students might feel easier to do their work and will do it well. For these reason, this kind of sites are legitimate business.

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Good morning, Reina! There were some corrections found in your composition. I apologize if I checked it a little late. Have a wonderful day ahead!~~Teacher Erine~~ Students who don’t want to do their homework can find dozens of sites on the Internet that offer essays for sale. Do you think this is a legitimate business, or should these enterprises be shut down? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.In my case the sites of this business are legitimate. >> In my case, the sites of this kind of businesses are legitimate. First, there is charge for that such as money or points. >> First, there is a charge such as money or points. It is not free and there is charge of the documents copyright. >> Correct. Second, these sites can help students to do their homework. >> Correct. The documents could be used as a normative reference. >> Correct So the students might feel easier to do their work and will do it well. >> So the students might feel it is easier to do their work and will do it well. For these reason, this kind of sites are legitimate business. >> For these reasons, I can say they that these sites are legitimate.

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