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2015-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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What do you thing are some things which many people are afraid of? Why are they afraid of them? Give some examples. I think what people are afraid the most is to fail from something, especially they challenged to something new. As we get older, challenge for something new is really hard up to making a decision. In the process of achieving your goal, you can be desperated sometimes, being afraid of failure. Now that we are constantly compareing ourselves to others who look great in their fields, it puts us to the corners. Money will follow automatically if you achieved your goals.

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Hi there my dear [이름],

Thank you once again for doing your homework.

You did really great and I do hope you will keep up the good work.

I can\'t wait to hear your voice again tomorrow.:)
Take care and have a great day...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

>>I think what people are afraid the most is to fail from something, especially when they are challenged to do something new.

As we get older, challenge for something new is really hard up to making a decision.

>>correct

In the process of achieving your goal, you can be desperated sometimes, being afraid of failure.

>>In the process of achieving your goal, you can be desperate at times, being afraid of failure.

Now that we are constantly compareing ourselves to others who look great in their fields, it puts us to the corners.

>>correct

Observe the proper spelling of the word COMPARING.

Money will follow automatically if you achieved your goals.

>>correct

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