15/10 homewrk

2012-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I'll find somewhere to live. Then I'll give you my address. --I'll give you my address when I find somewhere. 2. I'll do the shopping. Then I'll come straight back home. -- I'll come straght back home after I do the shopping. 3. I'll do the shopping. Then I'll come straight back home -- 4. It's going to get dark. Let's go home before that. --Let's go home before It's getting to dark. 5. She must apologize to me first. I won't speak to her until then. --I won't speek to her until she must appologize to me.

강사 첨삭

An amazing day to you! I know you gave it your best to do this homewrok. I appreciate every single effort you put in learning. ^^ Have a blessed day! T. Aurora 1. I\'ll find somewhere to live. Then I\'ll give you my address.--I\'ll give you my address when I find somewhere.>>I\'ll give you my address when I find somewhere to live.2. I\'ll do the shopping. Then I\'ll come straight back home.-- I\'ll come straght back home after I do the shopping.>>Correct!3. I\'ll do the shopping. Then I\'ll come straight back home --4. It\'s going to get dark. Let\'s go home before that.--Let\'s go home before It\'s getting to dark.>>Let\'s go home before it gets dark.5. She must apologize to me first. I won\'t speak to her until then.--I won\'t speek to her until she must appologize to me. >>I won\'t speak to her until she apologises.  

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