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I like traveling with my family. We always go traveling together. When I was young, my family was poor so I couldn't go to travel a lot. So I don't have memory with my family. So after I am married, I go to travel with my family. After my children grow up, I want them that they have a lot of memory with my husband and me. Sometimes, I think about my old sister. She was very poor with me when we were young. She is still poor because of her husband so I am sorry about that. She lives far away from my house so we can't often meet. I sometimes visit to my sister's house and then I go to travel with her children. She is sorry about it. She doesn't attend there because she has no money. I want them to be happy for many years to come.

    Hello [이름]! You\'re really working hard today. Some reminders: 1. You can use \'go traveling\' or \'travel\' but not \'go to travel\'. 2. Notice the difference between \'I am married\' and \'I got married\'. Teacher Venus^^   I like traveling with my family.>>>CORRECT   We always go traveling together. >>>CORRECT When I was young, my family was poor so I couldn\'t go to travel a lot. >>>When I was young, my family was poor so I couldn\'t travel a lot. So I don\'t have memory with my family.>>>So I don\'t have special memories with my family.   So after I am married, I go to travel with my family.>>>So after I got married, I travel with my family.   After my children grow up, I want them that they have a lot of memory with my husband and me.>>>When my children grow up, I want that they have a lot of memories with my husband and me.   Sometimes, I think about my old sister.>>>CORRECT   She was very poor with me when we were young.>>>She and I were very poor when we were young.   She is still poor because of her husband so I am sorry about that.>>>CORRECT   She lives far away from my house so we can\'t often meet.>>>CORRECT   I sometimes visit to my sister\'s house and then I go to travel with her children.>>>I sometimes visit my sister\'s house and then I travel with her children.   She is sorry about it.>>>CORRECT   She doesn\'t attend there because she has no money.>>>She doesn\'t attend there because her money is not enough.   I want them to be happy for many years to come. >>>CORRECT