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Hi there Ms. [이름],
\"No one can serve two masters. Either you will hate the one and love the other, or you will be devoted to he one and despise the other.\" This is from the Bible. I believe you cannot do two things at the same time very well. Good job for today\'s homework, Ms. [이름]!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I agree.
>>correct!
It is impossible to have a successful career and a happy family life.
>>correct!
Because I have to work over time to success.
>>I have to work over time to succeed.
I have to think about my job at all time.
>>I have to think about my job all the time.
So I can\'t take care of my family.
>>correct!
Many korean chief executive officers like to work over time with their employee for their company.
>>Many Korean chief executives like to work over time with their employees for their company.
So many employees believe that it is possible to success about working over time.
>>correct!
That is the reason why I agree.
>>correct!
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