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What are some things that define a culture? For example, music, language etc.
Hmm.. pan-so-ri is music culture.
What do you think is interesting about your culture?
Our cuntry's culture is very emotional delightful.
What has surprised you when you've met people from other countries?
I never surprised foreigners..^^
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[이름]! You are right about the culture. Music is one big thing that defines a culture. Also the clothing or the fasion of one country would define it\'s culture.. Very good idea! Keep practicing!
What are some things that define a culture? For example, music, language etc.Hmm.. pan-so-ri is music culture.>>> One thing that define a culture would be the music. Here we have pan-so-ri is music culture.
What do you think is interesting about your culture?Our cuntry\'s culture is very emotional delightful.
>>> Our country\'s culture is very emotionally delightful.What has surprised you when you\'ve met people from other countries?I never surprised foreigners..^^
>>> I never get to surprised foreigners.
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