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2016-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

Nowadays, many young people get easy a lot of things. So they can think getting is very easy. However they don't know easy come, easy go. I always tell my children that we have to save money and keep a lot of things for our future. Our life is like marathon. So we have to prepare many things. I hope that my children don't forget it in their lives.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [이름]!

Well said, Ms. [이름]! Many people take things just for granted. They don\'t know how to prioritize. Anyway, take care of yourself. See you in class!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

Nowadays, many young people get easy a lot of things.

>> Nowadays, young people get a lot of things easily.
So they can think getting is very easy.

>> So they think life is very easy.
However they don\'t know easy come, easy go.

>> correct!
I always tell my children that we have to save money and keep a lot of things for our future.

>> correct!
Our life is like marathon.

>> Our life is like a marathon.
So we have to prepare many things.

>> correct!
I hope that my children don\'t forget it in their lives.

>> I hope that my children don\'t forget what I tell them all their lives.

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