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2016-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

I always try to become honest opinion. I always tell my children you have to go on a diet. When you wear your beautiful clothes, you are not beautiful because of your fat. Sometimes my children don't like listening. However I always tell my coworkers you are very beautiful when they wear a new clothe despite they are not beautiful. It is my white lie.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!
We sometimes tell a white lie so that we won\'t hurt other people\'s feelings or when we try to protect someone. I do that too. I think everybody does it. However, a white lie is still a lie.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I always try to become honest opinion.
>> I always try to give my honest opinion.
I always tell my children you have to go on a diet.
>> correct!
When you wear your beautiful clothes, you are not beautiful because of your fat.
>> When you wear beautiful clothes, you are not beautiful because you are fat.
Sometimes my children don\'t like listening.
>> correct!
However I always tell my coworkers you are very beautiful when they wear a new clothe despite they are not beautiful. It is my white lie.
>> However, I always tell my coworkers you are very beautiful when they wear a new clothes even if they are not beautiful. That is my white lie.

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