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학생이 쓴 원문
Maybe..
I want to go there..
However during I live, I can't go there.
It need a lot of time but I hope my children go to visit.
However my children can't live there during their life.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]!
I guess there are things we cannot do in this life no matter how we wish and dream it. Sad but true.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Maybe..
>> Maybe, that\'s true.
I want to go there..
>> correct!
However during I live, I can\'t go there.
>> However, during my this lifetime, I can\'t go there.
It need a lot of time but I hope my children go to visit.
>> It needs a lot of time but I hope my children could go there to visit.
However my children can\'t live there during their life.
>> However my children can\'t live there.
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