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Hello there Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for making your homework despite your busy schedule.
Like I said, I hate shopping because I don\'t like crowded places.
Anyway, enjoy shopping with your daughter tomorrow. See you on Monday!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
In my case, when I buy something, I think a lot of things.
>> In my case, before I buy something, I think about it many times.
OR>> As for me, I have to consider many things before buying anything.
For example cost, necessary things and design.
>> correct!
You are right.
>> correct!
Most women like going shopping and windows shopping.
>> Most women like going shopping and window shopping.
I like it too, but I sometimes think it needs a lot of free time to shopping.
>> I like it too but I think you need a lot of free time to go shopping.
So I think it wastes time.
>> So I think it is a waste of time.
However I sometimes go to the shops and department store because of my family.
>> correct!
My husband likes going shopping and my eldest daughter too but they don\'t want to go shopping together.
>> correct!
OR>> My husband and my eldest daughter love shopping but they don\'t want to go shopping together.
Because their opinion are different so I have to go shopping with my daughter and we can have date of time.
>> Because their opinions differ and so I have to go shopping with my daughter and we can have a date.
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