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2017-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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In my case, when I buy something, I think a lot of things. For example cost, necessary things and design. You are right. Most women like going shopping and windows shopping. I like it too, but I sometimes think it needs a lot of free time to shopping. So I think it wastes time. However I sometimes go to the shops and department store because of my family. My husband likes going shopping and my eldest daughter too but they don't want to go shopping together. Because their opinion are different so I have to go shopping with my daughter and we can have date of time.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Ms. [이름]!

Thank you for making your homework despite your busy schedule.

Like I said, I hate shopping because I don\'t like crowded places.

Anyway, enjoy shopping with your daughter tomorrow. See you on Monday!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

In my case, when I buy something, I think a lot of things.

>> In my case, before I buy something, I think about it many times.

OR>> As for me, I have to consider many things before buying anything.
For example cost, necessary things and design.

>> correct!
You are right.

>> correct!
Most women like going shopping and windows shopping.

>> Most women like going shopping and window shopping.
I like it too, but I sometimes think it needs a lot of free time to shopping.

>> I like it too but I think you need a lot of free time to go shopping.
So I think it wastes time.

>> So I think it is a waste of time.
However I sometimes go to the shops and department store because of my family.

>> correct!
My husband likes going shopping and my eldest daughter too but they don\'t want to go shopping together.

>> correct!

OR>> My husband and my eldest daughter love shopping  but they don\'t want to go shopping together.

Because their opinion are different so I have to go shopping with my daughter and we can have date of time.

>> Because their opinions differ and so I have to go shopping with my daughter and we can have a date.

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