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학생이 쓴 원문
Today's generation of teenagers are very difficult more than the past.
Because they have a lot of things to do.
They also have uncertain future with thier job.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!(\",)
The future is always uncertain regardless of age and time. But you are right, the children must prepare now for their future.
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
Today\'s generation of teenagers are very difficult more than the past.
>> Today\'s generation of teenagers have more difficulties compared to the past.
Because they have a lot of things to do.
>> correct!
They also have uncertain future with thier job.
>> They also have uncertain future about their jobs.
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