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My parent is very diligent so I can learn mant things because of them.
They always love me despite I am not dilligent.
All parents are in the world special.
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Hello Ms. [이름]!
You are correct! Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this topic!
I revised your sentences and I hope these will be useful for you!
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~Teacher Rain~
My parent is very diligent so I can learn mant things because of them.
>> My parents are very diligent and I have learned many things because of them.
They always love me despite I am not dilligent.
>> They always love me despite that I\'m not diligent.
All parents are in the world special.
>> All parents in the world are special.
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