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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
Wow Chuseok is here!
I apologized for not having our class for one week. I\'m still hoping to talk to you again.^^
Ah! Yes it\'s a bad act! You are so naughty!
Nice hearing your opinion about this topic!
Have a great time and holiday ahead! ^^
~Teacher Rain~
If I could be invisible for a day.. I would go to the bank and I want to bring my money secretly and than next day I ask a bank worker to take out my money.
>> If I could be invisible for a day, I would go to the bank and bring out my money. And on the next day, I will withdraw my deposited money.
Is it very a bad act? You are right but it is just imagination.
>> Is it very a bad act? You are right but it is just an imagination.
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