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Hi there Ms. [이름]!(\",)
The movie you mentioned is really popular in your country. Most of my students watched it. I really want to watch it too. In addition, one of the main actor is Cha Tae-Hyun so I\'m sure this is a hilarious movie. Thank you for telling me about the movie. You did a great job!(\",)
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
Recently, I watched a movie entitled \"Along With the Gods: The Two Worlds, 2017\" with my family.
>> correct!
It is a cartoon original.
>> It is originally a cartoon.
OR>> It is based on a webcomic/webtoon.
The story of this movie is that human beings a new life through seven trials for 49 days after death.
>> The story of this movie is about human beings new life through seven trials for 49 days after death.
So we can see the main character\'s past life. It is a fantasy movie.
>> correct!
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