15Jan2025_home work
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: What are the best ways to make a good first impression?
Answer :
I learned MOT when I was majoring in business administration, and it determines a person\'s image in 3 seconds. So to make a good first impression, I think it will be a smile and neat clothes, and if you add it, it will be a confident look.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]! That\'s an interesting concept. But, I agree that dressing up neatly and coming up with a smiling face always work.
-T. Sonny
I learned MOT when I was majoring in business administration, and it determines a person\'s image in 3 seconds. >>Correct!
So to make a good first impression, I think it will be a smile and neat clothes, and if you add it, it will be a confident look.
>>So to make a good first impression, I think, a smile and neat clothes are essential and with that combination, you will look confident.
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