15th July

As we live in our life, Who is the most thankful to you? I think that most of people say their mom. I am alos my mom. I owe to my mom because she did everything to give me in my life. The mom's love is the most powerful and strong in the world. I'm also trying to support my children as like my mom. I have two children, sun and daughter. I really want to be a good father to them. I know it's not easy. But, I try and try to do it. After time goes by, I want to smile smoothly when I close eyes. My son is just six years old, But there is some trouble with me. So first of all, I have to solve it. I do my best for that and I'll settle it by this month.

Hello [이름]! Our mothers are important in our lives. It is good that you are trying your best to be like your mother in cases of guiding and disciplining your children. Being a parent is not easy, you always go through a lot of trials or experiences. Do not feel bad if you did something wrong because it is just normal. Like children, we also commit mistakes that we cannot take back but we can make up for it. I know that you always do your best for your children and I appreciate it that you tellmeall about it. Always remember that I am here for you when you need some advice. See you on Monday! -T.Faye - Here are some of the corrections to your composition: As we live in our life, Who is the most thankful to you? >>As we live our life, who do you thank the most?I think that most of people say their mom. >>I think most of the people say their mom. I am alos my mom.>>I also say my mom. >>Or: I agree with them. I owe to my mom because she did everything to give me in my life. >>I owe everything to mymom because she gave me everything I needed in mylife.The mom's love is the most powerful and strong in the world. >>A mom's love is the most powerful and strong.I'm also trying to support my children as like my mom. >>I'm also trying to support my children like my mom did for me.I have two children, sun and daughter. >>I have two childre, a son and a daughter.I really want to be a good father to them. >>Correct! I know it's not easy. >>Correct! But, I try and try to do it.>>Correct! After time goes by, I want to smile smoothly when I close eyes.>>As time goes by, I just want to smile when I close my eyes. My son is just six years old, But there is some trouble with me.>>My son is six years old and I am having some troubles with him. So first of all, I have to solve it. >>Correct! I do my best for that and I'll settle it by this month. >>I will do my best to settle that this month.