16/10 Homework

2012-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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1. Tom might phone while I'm out this evening if he does, can you take a message? 2. I'm going to Rome next week. when I'm there, I hope to visit a friend of mind. 3. I think Jill will get the job. I'll be very surprised when she doesn't get it. 4. I'm going shopping. if you want anything, I can get it for you. 5. I'm going away for a few days. I'll phone you when I get back.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름]. Nice of you to send in your homework really early. You only incurred one mistake. ^^ Good job! T. Aurora 1. Tom might phone while I\'m out this evening if he does, can you take a message?>>Correct!2. I\'m going to Rome next week. when I\'m there, I hope to visit a friend of mind.>>Correct!3. I think Jill will get the job. I\'ll be very surprised when she doesn\'t get it.>>if4. I\'m going shopping. if you want anything, I can get it for you.>>Correct!5. I\'m going away for a few days. I\'ll phone you when I get back. >>Correct!  

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