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I want to visit a lot of countries that are to speak English. So I order someting to speak English by myself. Also I want to guide for my children in countries. I really really want to speak English very well. Before I die, I want to meet many foreigners and talk about a lot of things. When I visited in Beijing with my co-worker, I envy her. She could speak English. So she always could go places where she want to visit alone. My long dream is to speak English very well and then I visit in the world.

Hello [이름]!   You explained well about your dreams. However I was confused with some of your sentences. That\'s why it\'s important to be clear. Clarity refers mainly to sentences, although, since sentences are made up of words, diction (word choice) is important.  Diction affects clarity because imprecise words make the meaning unclear.  The main concern is:  Does each sentence communicate the desired point, without confusion?  One key to clear sentences is effective syntax (sentence structure):  the order of and relationship between words, phrases, and clauses in a sentence.    Teacher Venus^^   I want to visit a lot of countries that are to speak English. >>>I want to visit a lot of English speaking countries. So I order someting to speak English by myself. >>>So I order something in English by myself. Also I want to guide for my children in countries. >>>Also I want to guide my children when we go abroad. I really really want to speak English very well. >>>CORRECT Before I die, I want to meet many foreigners and talk about a lot of things.>>>CORRECT   When I visited in Beijing with my co-worker, I envy her. >>>When I visited Beijing with my co-worker, I envied her. She could speak English. >>>CORRECT So she always could go places where she want to visit alone. >>>So she always could go alone to the places where she wants to visit. My long dream is to speak English very well and then I visit in the world. >>>My long term dream is to speak English very well and then to travel around the world.