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2016-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

I agree. Smiling in our lives is important. Nowaday many people feel depressed, sad and anger. They need some excirse every days.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms. [이름]!

Have you heard of an old song called \'Smile\' by Nat king Cole. The song goes like this,

Smile tho\' your heart is aching

Smile even tho\' it\'s breaking

When there are clouds in the sky

You\'ll get by.

If you smile

Through your fear and sorrow

Smile and maybe tomorrow

You\'ll see the sun come shinning through for you.

It\'s a nice song with a very good message. Try listening to it. You can find it on YouTube or Naver.

Have a great day! Always smile! See you!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I agree.

>> correct!
Smiling in our lives is important.

>> correct!
Nowaday many people feel depressed, sad and anger.

>> Nowadays, many people feel depressed, sad and angry.
They need some excirse every days.

>> They need to exercise everyday.

OR>> They have to exercise daily.

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