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My husband and I are saving money for our future.
However, we have to buy a new car because we are working couple.
Saving money is very important but spending money is very important too.
If we don't save money, we have to make a loan to buy a new car.
However I am sad because I have to save money for a long time again for my future.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
Wow! that\'s perfect. Job well done, Ms. [이름]. I know it\'s hard to earn money but it is even harder to save it. I know you can do it though. See you tomorrow!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
My husband and I are saving money for our future.
>> correct!
However, we have to buy a new car because we are working couple.
>> correct!
Saving money is very important but spending money is very important too.
>> correct!
If we don\'t save money, we have to make a loan to buy a new car.
>> correct!
However I am sad because I have to save money for a long time again for my future.
>> correct!
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