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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!
Christmas is the happiest time of the year in the Philippines. It\'s time for family get together. It\'s also the time of the year when people share their blessings or what they have more easily. What about your country, when is he happiest time of the year?
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I envy singel.
>> I envy people who are single.
Before I am married, I feel Christmas so when I think Christmas, it makes my heart flutter.
>> Before I got married, I can feel the Christmas spirit so when I think about Christmas, it makes my heart flutter.
I always think shipping, gifts, music and haveing a date.
>> I always thought about shipping, gifts, music and having a date.
Now, I have to give money for my father-in-law and my family.
>> correct!
I also have to cook for dinner.
>> correct!
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