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2017-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Thank you. [이름] I could find Beatles songs on the internet. I like "Hey Jude" and "Let It Be" by Beatles. So I bought mp3 on the internet. I read this songs and I could understand it. I want to learn English with them. Thanks to you.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [이름]!
You are very much welcome! Like I said, old songs are better because the lyrics are simpler and easier to understand compared to today\'s music. Enjoy listening to them while learning!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Thank you.
>> correct!
You recommended songs for me.
>> correct!
I could find Beatles songs on the internet.
>> correct!
I like \"Hey Jude\" and \"Let It Be\" by Beatles.
>> I like \"Hey Jude\" and \"Let It Be\" by the Beatles.
So I bought mp3 on the internet.
>> So I bought an mp3 file of their songs on the internet.
I read this songs and I could understand it.
>> correct!
I want to learn English with them.
>> correct!
Thanks to you.
>> correct!

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