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Hi there Ms. [이름]!
I guess you\'ll have to think more about it. You have to weigh the pros and cons if you move in to a new apartment which is expensive but very convenient versus an older one but enough to live in with your family and is much cheaper. Which do you think is better?
Take care!
~T. Lynn
These days, apartment supply is too much in Korea.
>> These days, there are many apartments in Korea.
However I can\'t buy it because the price of an apartment is still too expensive.
>> However, I can\'t afford one yet because it is very expensive.
Also, it seems that the price of my own apartment will fall.
>> Also, it seems that the cost of our apartment now will decrease.
I wanted to buy a new apartment for a long time ago.
>> I had been wanting to move to a new apartment for a long time.
But I don\'t know what to do because my real estate market is uneasy.
>> But I\'m not sure what to do because the real estate market is unstable.
I have the plan next year my family will move to a new city.
>> I am planning for my family to move to a new city next year.
My husband wants to buy an old apartment because it is to save money for our future.
>> My husband wants to rent an old apartment to save money for our future.
But I want to buy a new apartment. I know my husband is right.
>> But I want to rent/own a new apartment but I know that my husband is right.
I have to loan much money from the bank to buy it.
>> I have to loan big amount of money from the bank to buy it.
So I understand him but I want really the new apartment to live Because it is located around the subway station and a big mart.
>> So I understand him but I really want a new apartment to live in which is located around/nearby the subway station and a big mart.
That is the reasons why I want to buy it.
>> That is the reason why I want to buy it.
I can\'t agree about my husband\'s opinion despite he is right.
>> I can\'t agree to my husband\'s opinion although he is right.
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