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Hi there Ms. [이름]!
Everything is changing. Technology, the weather, places and people. Stay single or get married? It\'s up to the person I guess. We all have choices anyway. As long as we are happy with the choice we make, I say go for it!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Nowadays, many young couple in my country don\'t want marriage for their future.
>> correct!
They want to live with their free time without a partner in their life.
>> correct!
Instand of it, they want enjoyable time in affluent life.
>> Beside that, they want to have an enjoyable and affluent life.
I agree but when they decide to live together, they have to think their future with their children.
>> I agree but when they decide to live together, they have to think of their future with their children.
If I could earn a lot of money, I don\'t marriage in my life but I can\'t.
>> If I could earn a lot of money, I too wouldn\'t want to get married but I can\'t do that.
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