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학생이 쓴 원문
Because you are human.
Human want a lot of things.
Sometimes honesty is lost a lot of things by it.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
We all have wants and needs. Some people like me don\'t know how to prioritize the needs so I lost money buying things that I want. I mean instead of buying the things that I need I buy some food that I crave which is not really important. What about you?
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Because you are human.
>> correct!
OR>> Because we are humans.
Human want a lot of things.
>> Humans want a lot of things.
Sometimes honesty is lost a lot of things by it.
>> Sometimes honesty is lost because of these things that we want to have.
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