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학생이 쓴 원문
I can't believe about future of education in my country.
However, I think students have to study because studying is their job.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!(\",)
As long as we are still alive, there is still hope. So let\'s hope for the best in our future or else we will be so devastated.
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
I can\'t believe about future of education in my country.
>> I can\'t believe about the future of education in my country.
However, I think students have to study because studying is their job.
>> correct!
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