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2017-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kathy

학생이 쓴 원문

If I could learn to speak another language, I would learn the Japanese language. If I would get fired, I could stay at home all day. So I could learn another language but I don't want get fired.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Thank you for sending your homework.

~~ Teacher Kathy

Here are my corrections for you:

If I could learn to speak another language, I would learn the Japanese language.

>> If I could learn to speak another language, I would like to learn the Japanese language.
If I would get fired, I could stay at home all day.

>> Correct!

OR:

>> If I get fired, I can stay at home all day.
So I could learn another language but I don\'t want get fired.

>> I really want to learn the language, but of course I don\'t want to get fired.

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