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2018-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

I usually stay at home on the weekends. I usually get up very late. I watch TV and have breakfast with my family. I have a lot on my to-do list at home. I spend doing housechores like cleaning, laundry and more. My husband and my children are very busy. They usually go out to meet their friends and I can have a rest time alone. I usually watch a moive and go to execrise alone.

강사 첨삭

I usually stay at home on the weekends.

>> Correct 

or

>> I normally stay at home on weekends.
 I usually get up very late. I watch TV and have breakfast with my family.

>> Correct

or

>> I usually get up late, watch TV and have breakfast with my family.
 I have a lot on my to-do list at home. 

>> Correct 

or

>> I always have a packed to-do list at home.
 I spend doing housechores like cleaning, laundry and more.

>> I spend my time doing house chores like cleaning, doing the laundry and more. 

or

>> I spend most of my time doing house chores.
 My husband and my children are very busy.

>> Correct
 They usually go out to meet their friends and I can have a rest time alone.

>>  They frequently go out to meet their friends, So, I can have a rest time alone.
 I usually watch a moive and go to execrise alone.

>> I routinely watch movies and go to the gym to exercise alone.

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