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학생이 쓴 원문
Having rest is very important in our lives.
This vacation is very happy.
My family can\'t have vacation because of my husband.
My children seem very happy like me.
I hope that we go to the trip every month.
강사 첨삭
Having rest is very important in our lives.
>> Correct
This vacation is very happy.
>> Correct
or
>> This vacation is really enjoyable.
My family can\'t have vacation because of my husband.
>> Correct
or
>>> My family can\'t go on a vacation because of my husband.
My children seem very happy like me.
>> Correct
I hope that we go to the trip every month.
>> I hope that we can go on a trip every month.
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