16 day\'s homework - Why is English fruency significant for you?
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Why is English fluency significant for you?
Because I want to present my thesis about the issue of my doctor degree course in front of another foreign scholars. I got doctorate in 2018. My pet subject is traditional moral education. Especially it is Buddhism Moral education. It is to apply modernally. l have looked forward the way to teach moral or ethics in the school [이름]ce I became a teacher. our traditional thought and culture implicate various means. I want to let another people know it someday.
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Thank you for this Ms. [Name]!
Because I want to present my thesis about the issue of my doctor degree course in front of another foreign scholars.
>> > Because I want to present my thesis about a certain issue for my doctorate degree course in front of other foreign scholars.
I got doctorate in 2018.
>> > I got my doctorate degree in 2018
My pet subject is traditional moral education.
>> > correct
Especially it is Buddhism Moral education.
>> > It is especially about the Buddhism Moral education.
It is to apply modernally.
>> > It is applied modernly.
l have looked forward the way to teach moral or ethics in the school [이름]ce I became a teacher.
>> > l have looked forward to the way of teaching morals or ethics in the school [이름]ce I became a teacher.
our traditional thought and culture implicate various means.
>> > correct
I want to let another people know it someday.
>> > I want to let other people know about it someday.
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