16, Sep. Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
ㅇ Theme : Describe a place you will never forget
ㅇ Well... In my case, i will never forget at Jangsung station. When i was a solder(as you konw, all of a Korean man has to fulfill their military duty), my wife was waiting for me in this station. In detail, i was going to the station to came back to my region troops after finishing to take a education in the Artillery School located in Jangsung, Kangju Province and my wife was waiting at the station to meet me. At that time, i saw a beautiful girl, my wife ^^;; So, I never forget the station and that time.
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[이름],
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Thank you so much for sharing this again.
Good job ! See you in our class!
T. Dahlia
Theme : Describe a place you will never forget
Well... In my case, i will never forget at Jangsung station.
>> Well in my case, I will never forget the place at Jangsung Station.
When i was a solder(as you konw, all of a Korean man has to fulfill their military duty), my wife was waiting for me in this station.
>> When I was a solder as you knew all of Korean man has to fulfill their military duty.
my wife was waiting for me in this station.
>> My wife was waiting for me at the station.
In detail, i was going to the station to came back to my region troops after finishing to take a education in the Artillery School located in Jangsung -
>>In detailed, I was going to the station to come back to my region troops after I finished my training to take an education in Artillery School located in Jangsung,
Kangju Province and my wife was waiting at the station to meet me.
>> Kangju Province and my wife was waiting at the station to meet me.
At that time, i saw a beautiful girl, my wife ^^;;
>> At that time I saw a beautiful girl, my wife.
So, I never forget the station and that time.
>> So I will never forget the place and the time.
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