If you could have it your way, how would you like to spend it?

2023-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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During the holidays, there are so many things to do. I meet friends I haven\'t seen for a long time and spend time eating delicious food and sweet. I go camping or go on a nearby country trip. I watch all the movies and dramar series that i wanted to see. l also read books that i wanted to read and organize my thoughts. My MBTI personality is J, so I like to make plans for a new start. There are so many things i want to do. so, I want to have 365 holidays a year.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for this Philip!

During the holidays, there are so many things to do.
>>> correct 
I meet friends I haven\'t seen for a long time and spend time eating delicious food and sweet.
>>>  I meet friends I haven\'t seen for a long time and spend time eating delicious food and sweets.
I go camping or go on a nearby country trip.
>>> correct 
I watch all the movies and dramar series that i wanted to see.
>>>  OR: I watch all the movies and drama series that I have been wanting to see.
l also read books that I wanted to read and organize my thoughts.
>>> correct 
My MBTI personality is J, so I like to make plans for a new start.
>>> correct 
There are so many things I want to do. 
>>> correct 
so, I want to have 365 holidays a year.
>>>  OR: So, I wish I could have 365 holidays a year.

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